I 1st.- Supporting Point.- The product is weights to exercise
A.-Example.- A product advertised in Men's Fitness Magazine
1.- Further Detail.- It is small and is for muscles of the arms, the back and others.
2.- Further Detail.- It hardens the men's body
B.- Analysis.- It is only created on for men's body and his apparence.
II 2nd.- Supporting Point .- The product has excellent strategies for getting a strong male body.
A.-Example.- It has a specific daily routine by getting good results.
1.- Further Detail.- Its routine include weekends.
2.- Further Detail.- Each day is a different and harder routine exercise.
B.- Analysis.- It is very efficient if it is used in the right way.
II 3rd.- Supporting Point .-The men must have a healthy habits.
A.-Example.- The men must eat any healthy food low fat and a good time to rest.
1.- Further Detail.- His diet is salad, vegetables, and a lot of water.
2.- Further Detail.- He must have a specific time to go to rest.
B.- Analysis.- It allow the men's body looks better and healthier.
A very well organize outline about the masculinity about men. I can't wait to see how your gonna compare weight and exercising to men masculinity. How will you demonstrate how this is what it means to be a man and how this will effect the opposite sex in what way? I hope you can find a way to including stuff about female and stuff about what kind of masculinity this is.
ReplyDeleteweights are a common asset in mens' work activity. it is something that is used to improve a man's image in a very physical way. i really like this topic. good choice!
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice start but where is your initial/preliminary thesis. Please review the assignment. Based on the questions you answered in class on Monday, you must first state what type of masculinity is the ad promoting? This will be your thesis. In order to support your thesis, you need to identify three aspects of the ad itself which support your thesis. Your current outline seems to be listing general ideas about working out?
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